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Writing Journal
Activity
1.1.5 – Understanding the question
Part 1: I believe that the question is asking that I
make a summary of what the ideal health system in South Africa would look like.
The summary should be in terms of how it would function, how it would be
funded, and what type of care it would be able to provide.
Part 2: To write down the current state of healthcare
in South Africa and break it down into its most basic components. Thereafter
one would compare it to the ideal health system described in part one.
Thereafter one would do research on the current plans being implemented to
achieve this and evaluate whether the ideal healthcare system would be able to
be implemented in South Africa’s current socio-economic climate.
Part 3: Lastly one should revisit the previous parts
and from there come up with a possible stepping-stone that one could implement
in order to achieve universal healthcare.
Activity
1.1.5.2 – Searching for literature
Step 1:
·
What is universal health as a concept?
·
What does
universal health consist of in terms of components?
·
How does the South African Health System compare
to universal health?
·
What are the components of the South African
system that would set it aside?
·
What can be done to overcome problems in the
health system?
·
Where would be a good place to start?
Step 2:
The difference between the two articles is that the first
article focuses primarily on the makeup of universal health coverage, whereas
the second article focuses on the progress South Africa is making towards
achieving this.
I believe both articles are relevant to the question, seeing
as one would first need to evaluate the meaning of Universal Health Coverage
before one could compare the South African Health system to it. That being
said, I believe I would get more use out of article two as it is more locally
focused on the South African healthcare system, which would naturally be the
subject of the course paper.
Step 3:
Topic 1 - The South African attempt at achieving universal
healthcare
Title: Achieving
universal health coverage in South Africa through a district health system
approach: conflicting ideologies of health care provision.
Author: Adam Fusheini, John Eyles.
Year: 2016
Title: Bridging the health inequality gap: an examination of
South Africa’s social innovation in health landscape. Infectious Diseases of
Poverty
Author: Katshuda de Villiers
Year: 2021
Topic 2 - Current state of the South African Healthcare
system
Title: Addressing Social Determinants of Health in South
Africa: the journey continues
Author: Vera Scott
Year: 2017
Title: Mortality and causes of death in South Africa
Author: StatsSa
Year: 2017
Topic 3 – The state of Hospitals in South Africa
Title: Health Services in South Africa: A basic introduction
Author: Kerry Cullinan
Year: 2006
Title: People-centeredness in health system reform. Public
perceptions of private and public hospitals in South Africa
Author: Lebogang Maseko; Bronwyn Harris
Year: 2018
Activity
1.2.5.1 - Applying SQ3R in Reading Academic Texts
PART 1: SURVEYING - STEP 1A: SKIMMING
Q1 - What is the title of your article and who is the author?
A - Achieving universal health coverage in South Africa through a district
health system approach: conflicting ideologies of health care provision by Adam
Fusheini and John Eyles.
Q2 - When was your article published? (If your article is
more than 10 years old, consider it outdated)
A – 2016
Q3 - Does your article contain an abstract?
A – Yes
Q4 - What are the headings in your text? (These will give
you a clue as to what each paragraph or section will cover. Read the first and
last sentence in each paragraph, not word for word but quickly to give you an
idea what each paragraph is about)
A – Can UHC provide service availability? What is the link between service
availability and districts? Why districts; a different ideology? Does UHC
reduce inequities? – Evidence from the pilot districts. Ideological tension – a
minimal universal benefit and the need for positive discrimination
Q5 - Does your article contain and tables and diagrams? (Not
all academic articles contain these, so do not write it off if you do not find
this section)
A – No
Q6 - Does your text have an in-text referencing and a
reference list at the end of it? (All academic articles should have this, if
yours does not, that it means it is not suitable for your course paper)
A – Yes
Q7 - Will this text be suitable for your essay?
A – Yes
PART 1: SURVEYING - STEP 1B SCANNING
Q1 - What are the key concepts/ideas you find in these
sections?
A – The article first discusses what UHC entails and how many countries are
setting long term plans to achieve this. Thereafter, the article discusses
South Africa’s plan for UHC, more specifically, the National Health Insurance
plan. The article explains how this would be a plan to pool government funds to
be able to support all South African in their quest for health without having
them be affected by discrimination, their socio-economic status, or insufficient
funds to pay for proper medical care. The article further explains how the NHI
will also help to reduce poverty and inequality established by South Africa’s
past. The article also mentions that UHC might remain an empty promise, because
of difficulties faced by South Africa in terms of economy and poverty. The
article goes on about the benefits of UHC regarding service delivery and
accessibility of healthcare and is even so detailed as to include challenges
regarding service delivery in different districts across South Africa.
Q2 - Will this text help you write on the topic you are
reading it for?
A – Yes
PART 2: QUESTIONING
Q1 - From the previous step, you started sectioning the
text by scanning the abstract, introduction and conclusion. Scan these sections
one more time and think of 3 questions about the text or your topic?
A – What benefits will UHC provide? Why is UHC necessary in South Africa? Does
the South African Government have a plan to provide UHC to its citizens?
PART 3: READING, RECALLING, REVIEWING – STEP 3A READING
Q2 - Answer your questions 3 questions:
A – UHC will provide the best possible quality of healthcare to the people
who need it with the added benefit of being affordable and accessible.
UHC is necessary in South Africa, because the current healthcare system does
not provide the necessary care to patients. UHC has the potential of
eliminating inequality on the front of health and will provide top quality
healthcare to everybody regardless of socioeconomic status. Thereby, certain
people will not receive better treatment than others, which is a struggle that
is still to be rectified.
The South African Government is planning on implementing the NHI. This is a
strategy for the government to be more involved in the healthcare system and provides
the opportunity to collect larger amounts of funding for the public health sector
and thereby improve staffing, equipment, accessibility and affordability.
PART 3: READING RECALLING REVIEWING – STEP 3B RECALL
Q1 - Now that you have read the text thoroughly, choose
one section that you read in the text. It can be the introduction, a paragraph
in the body or the conclusion. Without reading it again, in 150 – 250 words
what are the main points of this section?
The section I have chosen to do is the Abstract. As I recall
it mentions Universal Health and how it is growing in popularity and enthusiasm.
It then mentions how the South African government are among those who want to implement
it. It then mentions how the study is based off documents from the district
health systems and will explore challenges and opportunities regarding UHC in
South Africa. It then mentions the NHI, and the possibilities associated with
it and finally mentions that UHC achievement might be challenging due to practical
and ideological issues.
Activity 1.3.5.1 - Activity 1.3.5.1: Create an
essay outline
Topics I would like to address: |
|
What are the components of a
high-quality health care system, i.e., what should your
health system achieve and how? |
Main components: Accessibility Affordability Quality Not be prone to discrimination or
discriminatory practices to either patients or staff |
Can UHC be achieved in South Africa right now? |
UHC is difficult to achieve as of
right now, but by no means impossible. It would likely take a great many
years and involve a lot of raising awareness and changing of attitudes.
Furthermore, a redistribution of funds will be necessary, specifically towards
education and the healthcare system. |
One building block through which
to implement the process of reform of
the Health System to provide UHC. |
The first building block would
focus on education. Improving education, raising awareness of diseases,
raising awareness of ableist conduct and overall creating a population of
people with a better understanding of healthcare and the requirements of the
health system. |
I want my
course paper to have an added element of focusing on chronic illnesses, as I feel
it is a social justice issue that is often overlooked. From my own knowledge as
a person who lives in a family in which all three of my siblings and one of my
parents suffer with a very painful and debilitating chronic illness, I know
that there are no support structures in the health system for this. For example,
medical aid does not pay for the necessary medication. Without this medication,
however, this particular disease will cause paralysis and fusion of the spine
as the cerebra-spinal fluid calcifies due to inflammation. Furthermore, lack of
awareness of this disability causes struggles with ableism in daily life. Furthermore chronic disease is increasing and the health system is not prepared to take it on (IHME, 2020), which will increase the burden of disease on the country.
My
arguments will include:
1. The importance of healthcare education in raising awareness of chronic diseases and epidemics such as TB and AIDS, which will lessen the strain on healthcare professionals, seeing as the burden of disease greatly affects the functioning of the healthcare system (Allanise Cloete, 2010). By lessening the burden of disease one could be a step closer to the achievement of UHC.
2. The understaffing and poor education of healthcare professionals. How their work hours are far too long and strenuous, and that the education system has failed both patients and hospital staff (BusinessTech Staff, 2022). UHC will not be achieved if one can not achieve the acceptability of healthcare, which is an unrealistic expectation if medical staff cannot perform properly.
3. The mismanagement of the public health sector and the extortive prices of the private sector, leading to health inequity as a result of inaccessibility. Many people struggle to access hospitals because of the prices of travel to hospitals and clinics (Villiers, 2021). This makes South Africa's current health system inaccessible and thereby more difficult to achieve UHC.
4. Social justice issues in the healthcare systems such as the effect of poverty as an environmental determinant of health, their impact and how they can be solved (Pierce, 2020).
References:
Allanise Cloete, *. A. S. L. S. B. v. W. N. H. a. A. N.,
2010. Challenges Faced by People Living with HIV/AIDS in Cape Town, South
Africa: Issues for Group Risk Reduction Interventions. AIDS Res Treat.
BusinessTech Staff, 2022. Exodus of medical professionals in South Africa – leaving hospitals understaffed. [Online]Available at: https://businesstech.co.za/news/government/620949/exodus-of-medical-professionals-in-south-africa-leaving-hospitals-understaffed/ [Accessed 12 September 2022].
IHME, 2020. The Lancet: Latest global disease estimates reveal perfect storm of rising chronic diseases and public health failures fuelling COVID-19 pandemic. [Online]Available at: https://www.healthdata.org/news-release/lancet-latest-global-disease-estimates-reveal-perfect-storm-rising-chronic-diseases-and [Accessed 12 September 2022].
Villiers, K. d., 2021. Bridging the health inequality gap: an examination of South Africa’s social innovation in health landscape. Infectious Diseases of Poverty volume , 10(19).
Course Paper First Draft
Introduction
– What is Universal Healthcare and what does it encapsulate?[CD1]
Universal Health is a term used to
describe a health system in which all people have access to the necessary
healthcare. The healthcare in question encapsulates prevention of illness,
treatment of illness, rehabilitation and end-of-life care
In recent years the definition of
health to the public has changed to include how an individual feels about their
“state”
The most important part of UHC
would be accessibility. South Africa, however, has a highly unequal and
inefficient healthcare system
This does not however solve the
problem of quality in the South African healthcare system. One of the problems
faced by the health system is understaffing. There is reported to be only one
nurse for every 1000 people due to the crumbling economy and a large number of
medical staff leaving the country
South Africa is a country that
has been plagued by diseases such as TB and HIV, with the highest numbers of
active HIV cases in the world (Centers for Disease Control and Prevention,
2016). Another rising cause for concern is chronic diseases. Chronic illness is
predicted to increase, and world health systems are not prepared to take it on
(IHME, 2020). For this reason, this paper will have an added focus on universal
health care regarding chronic diseases.
The challenges associated with
the implementation of Universal Healthcare in South Africa
If one were to try to achieve
Universal healthcare in South Africa, there are definite areas of concern that
would need to be addressed.
Firstly, South Africa experiences
a large burden because of disease. The current healthcare system in South
Africa is greatly understaffed and overworked
About 15.5% of all premature deaths are
caused by HIV/AIDS and 12.4% thereof because of TB
Another burden regarding the
health of South African systems and the healthcare system is the prevalence of
violence in South Africa. In 2017, 15% percent of non-natural deaths were
caused by violence
Socio-economic status seems to
further impact the health of South African citizens. As discussed in the
previous mentions of the burdens experienced due to violence and disease,
health seems to be directly influenced by social class with more disease
experienced by people in lower income households and areas
Poverty is an ongoing problem in
South Africa despite several attempts to correct it with an unemployment rate
of 0.1%
The discussion continues to highlight
challenges faced in the healthcare system. Firstly, the South African
healthcare system is burdened by a lack of infrastructure, the burden of
diseases and the inadequate healthcare provided
The South African healthcare
system further perpetuates health inequities via the two-tiered healthcare
system which encapsulates the private and public sectors. The Public sector is
grossly underfunded but is the only form of healthcare that can be afforded by
lower income individuals, who happen to make up 71% of the South African
population
The South African Government’s
solution to the health inequities caused by the two-tiered healthcare system is
the idea of national health insurance. National Health Insurance is a
government project started in 2012 and involves the pooling of funds to allow
everybody an equal change[CD7]
to receive adequate healthcare
The burden caused by poverty is
also increasing over time
With all this in mind, it can be
concluded that Universal Healthcare cannot be implemented if one follows the
current trajectory. That is not to say that Universal Healthcare is not
achievable.
For South Africa to achieve
Universal Healthcare, the first problem that would need to be addressed is
poverty. Poverty acts as a social and environmental determinant of health,
which can either alleviate or worsen the burden of disease, mental health
concerns and violence on the healthcare system. One of the main differences
between the public and private sectors is that the private sector only treats
27% of the population
Poverty is largely as a result of
the unemployment rate in South Africa. Many people are struggling to find jobs
without tertiary education. A solution to this could be the improvement of the
education system. The plan would be three-part. The first would be to implement
a better education system so that more people could have the opportunity to
study and hopefully be allowed to be able to create jobs. The second would
involve teaching children about diseases such as TB and HIV and allow them to
not fall victim to stigmatisation and further allow them to understand
illnesses and what would be required of them as patients during their
treatment. The final part of the plan would be to properly teach people about
the NHI and how it will work, so that they will understand that they will no
langer need to worry about the financial burden that ill health will bring.
The NHI is a very important plan,
and the implementation thereof will likely allow for major differences in the
state of South African Health but will not be effective if the Government is in
debt, which is why it is important to first focus on alleviating poverty[CD9] .
References
Adam Fushein, J. E., 2016. Achieving universal health
coverage in South Africa through a district health system approach:
conflicting ideologies of health care provision. BMC Health Services
Research.
Allanise Cloete,
*. A. S. L. S. B. v. W. N. H. a. A. N., 2010. Challenges Faced by People
Living with HIV/AIDS in Cape Town, South Africa: Issues for Group Risk Reduction
Interventions. AIDS Res Treat.
BusinessTech
Staff, 2022. Exodus of medical professionals in South Africa – leaving
hospitals understaffed. [Online]
Available at: https://businesstech.co.za/news/government/620949/exodus-of-medical-professionals-in-south-africa-leaving-hospitals-understaffed/
[Accessed 12 September 2022].
Centers For
Disease Control and Prevention, 2016. CDC in South Africa: Why We're Here.
[Online]
Available at: https://www.cdc.gov/globalhealth/countries/southafrica/why/default.htm
[Accessed 12 September 2022].
Donald Skinner,
M. C., 2016. It’s complicated: why do tuberculosis patients not initiate or
stay adherent to treatment? A qualitative study from South Africa. BMC
Infect Dis., 16(1), pp. 1-9.
IHME, 2020. The
Lancet: Latest global disease estimates reveal perfect storm of rising
chronic diseases and public health failures fuelling COVID-19 pandemic. [Online]
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[Accessed 12 September 2022].
Koch, K. O. O.
&. S. F., 2018. Assessing changes in social determinants of health
inequalities in South Africa : a decomposition analysis. International
Journal for Equity in Health, 17(1).
Maromo, J., 2022.
State of SA Hospitals: ‘Gauteng hospitals are a mess’. [Online]
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[Accessed 12 September 2022].
Peter S Nyasulu,
2015. Public awareness and knowledge of the National Health Insurance in
South Africa. Pan African Medical Journal, 19(22), pp. 1-10.
Pierce, C., 2020.
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[Accessed 12 September 2022].
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2021. Healthcare in South Africa: how inequity is contributing to
inefficiency. [Online]
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[Accessed 08 September 2022].
Sartorius, N.,
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[Accessed 12 September 2022].
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and causes of death in South Africa:, Pretoria : Statistics South Africa.
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on the rise in South Africa. [Online]
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[Accessed 12 September 2022].
StatsSa, 2018. Crimes
against women in South Africa, an analysis of the, Pretoria : Statistics
South Africa .
Vera Scott, N. S.
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Villiers, K. d.,
2021. Bridging the health inequality gap: an examination of South Africa’s
social innovation in health landscape. Infectious Diseases of Poverty
volume , 10(19).
[CD1]In
your introduction you should state your thesis and provide evidence to support
your thesis. State the structure that your paper is going to follow.
[CD2]Font
size should be 12, line spacing should be 1.5.
[CD3]Good
point Bea, the life esidimeni scandal also showcases the colossal role that
corruption plays in hindering the achievement of UHC.
[CD4]Don’t
forget to include page numbers.
[CD5]You
did a good job by substantiating your point with evidence.
[CD6]Good
point
[CD7]Chance.
[CD8]You
did not only state the problems bedeviling the health sector but you went on to
provide solutions that can assist with achieving UHC, well done.
[CD9]In
your conclusion you should state briefly what your paper unpacked and also your
thesis.
[CD10]Place
the references in a new page.
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